The Larger Bowl (a pantoum)

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The Larger Bowl (a pantoum)

Let's start a blog -
we'll build a community.
We'll throw out ideas
for a world of diversity

We'll build a community -
attract like-minded thought.
For a world of diversity -
they all need to be taught.

We'll throw out ideas
if they refuse to adhere.
Let's start a blog -
is that an echo I hear?

Print | posted @ Wednesday, June 13, 2007 1:12 AM

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# re: The Larger Bowl (a pantoum)

by Eber Irigoyen at 6/13/2007 5:13 AM

@echo let's start a blog

# re: The Larger Bowl (a pantoum)

by Nisha at 6/13/2007 6:56 AM

I Completed argree with u. I think Blog is a best Idea to express your views as well as gather information

# re: The Larger Bowl (a pantoum)

by C.J. Anderson at 6/13/2007 7:23 AM

almost got it... as I understand the form, the last quatrain should be in the form:

2nd line next to last stanza
3rd line 1st stanza
4th line next to last stanza
1st line 1st stanza

Attract like-minded thought
We'll throw out ideas
They all need to be taught
Let's start a blog

# re: The Larger Bowl (a pantoum)

by Sahil Malik at 6/13/2007 2:24 PM

Scott - I think you've lost it.

The stress of keeping up with all this technology has finally popped a vein in your intelligent mind.

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